The Impaled

By Tania

This write is based on vlad tepes (pronounced tse-pesh) In his time ruling Wallachia in the mid 15th century he was know to have killed, mainly by method of impaling, 40,000 to 100,000 people.
The word Tepes stands for ‘impaler’ and was so coined because of Vlads propensity to punish victims by impaling them on stakes and displaying them publicly. An army coming to invade his land actually turned away at the sight that lay before them in battle…thousands of people impaled on stakes and the smell unbearable….
It is believed the character of Dracula in Brams Stokers novel was based upon Vlad Tepes..


Swimming through a pool of disease, wretched bones and

Torn up flesh…

Lead me to my home place Transylvania,

the place of Vlad Tepes



Mercy has no meaning here,

as the dark night she calls,

The souls of the slaughtered…

the thieves, the cheats and the whores



Blood flows like water through this land in which I reign..

Heavily...with a smell of death, welcoming you..

The impaled.

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© 2007 xtexamoxtaniax
Published on Monday, January 29, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i love how even the darkest pasts can still inspire!

  • A former member wrote: no doubt... the impaled, I thought I read somewhere, were to be alive when posted, though impaled, and to die by means of their own body weight, by force of gravity, pulling them further down the impaling pole.... sounds wonderfully wicked... Vlad lives o

  • A former member wrote: on through your twisted tribute to torture and history

  • Tania On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    :)

  • LOKI On Friday, February 9, 2007, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    This was awsome.I like the Dracula story anyway.I would like to see his castle

  • Tania On Friday, February 9, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    yes, i agree i have always been intrigued with transylvania for some reason..i would love to go there one day. thanks!

  • A former member wrote: beautiful as always tania. ~ red.

  • A former member wrote: Yes, this is gruesomely intense. I loved it. Welcome to DP.

  • A former member wrote: Very nice write. I enjoyed this.

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    i thought history research proved, he WAS the fabled dracula, vlad tepes dracul (was his full name). could be wrong, school is a blur to me. other than that, loved the violent imagery, it always keeps my attention.

  • Tania On Monday, January 29, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    yeah..full name vlad tepes dracul but i prefferd the other..but no it was not proved..the book/film is only fiction based on fact..

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    how badass (in my testosterone-filled oppinion) if it was true..... sigh... thanks for giving me a daydream topic of the day :)

  • Tania On Monday, January 29, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    lol. my pleasure!

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    "no really, the pleasures all on this side of the table"

  • Mylissa On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    I liked this a lot. I enjoyed the story behind it then the poem was very intense. wonderful.

  • Tania On Monday, January 29, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    Thank you..you are a strong and beautiful character and this often reflects in your work - of which i am still yet to choose my favourite..

  • Mylissa On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    Well thank you :)

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