Restless Soul

By Tania

Restless soul
Dangerous dreamer
The path infront is burnished
Watch your feet as they lead you
To this place of Misery

Restless soul
Impaired perfection
The path behind has perished
Dont look back at your shadow
For it has left you all alone

Restless soul
unsweetened essence
The enduring voyage has started
Your heart has been defeated
Your senses departed

Restless soul..come home..come home

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Published on Friday, January 26, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Restless Soul"

On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Vilification (20) wrote:

I love it....
On Thursday, March 1, 2007, Disassembly Boy (59) wrote:

Such beauty in desolation. I loved it. Thank you for your nice comments, once again. :)
A former member wrote: beautiful ~ red.
A former member wrote: this is another fine example of your talent.write on!
On Saturday, February 17, 2007, NapoleonsLust (16) wrote:

oh to go home..beautiful works and a beautiful face cant ask for more
On Sunday, February 18, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

Well thank you! x
A former member wrote: wonderful
On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, prettydisgrace (93) wrote:

great read...i enjoyed this alot.very intense.gr8 stringaling!
On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

thanks joleen..whats stringaling! jk;)
On Sunday, February 4, 2007, LOKI (161) wrote:

Dangerous dreamer.I like that line.Nice write.
On Monday, January 29, 2007, jack paper (121) wrote:

and with work like this maybe you've found a place to call home... welcome to DP
A former member wrote: Loved the tone of this work. Dripping with lonelyness, "For it has left you all alone". Its crazy to think about a place even your shadow won't go. prettyness wraped in a dark candy shell..
A former member wrote: again another amazing write. ~ red.
On Friday, January 26, 2007, lstdarkness (26) wrote:

First stanza is fantastic, I really enjoyed this write. I am looking forward to reading more... Welcome to DP!
On Friday, January 26, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

wonderful.
On Friday, January 26, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

so detached and yet enchanting, loved it
On Friday, January 26, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

Thank you kindly, coincedentially i have just been reading over some of your work! very impressive..
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

my work aint nada, just another heart on a sleve