What Was Once There
By CorruptedLittleGirl
The empty bed engulfs me
Cold cotton on either side of my warmth
I inhale the scent of the fabric
Wishing your scent was ingrained
It feels like yesterday that this bed seemed too small
And I wished that we'd had more room
But now I realize, it is all
too big
And the extra space does nothing but remind me of what was
once there
Those stuffy winter nights
When an open
window did nothing to alleviate the heat we emitted
Are now long
gone.
And a cold summer lies ahead.
The tickle of your
stubble
In the crook of my neck
Created just enough discomfort
to keep me from drifting
Into an eternal slumber
That
night
My small bedroom
Filled with too many childhood symbols
Became an ageless abyss
Of seclusion
Togetherness
And happiness.
But now I must wait
In my cold, empty
bed
Sniffing out the last remnants of your presence
Until you
can join me again
For that fleeting, sweltering winter.
Awards
Comments on "What Was Once There"
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed this,
thank you.
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On Thursday, January 11, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Yes, agree with the soul dancer here. At least a vision to come is there for you.
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A former member wrote:
Nothing keeps you cozy and warm like a good lover. le sigh.
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On Tuesday, January 9, 2007, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
awesome write. I was very happy to see a new one from you!
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A former member wrote:
I still get sad sometimes when I have to go asleep alone. And even though I'd prefer to sleep alone, it would still be nice to have someone to cuddle with at night... Nice write..
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On Monday, January 8, 2007, soul dancer
(96) wrote:
Lovely write. I liked the juxtaposition of summer being cold and winter hot.