Open heart surgery

By BeautifullyRuined

The way to a mans heart
is through his chest
SHARPENED SCALPEL
c|u|t|t|i|n|g
spli-ting
blood
d
r
i
p
p
i
n
g
open up the chest cavity
lets look inside
seperating r i b s
your hearts not as hard as you claimed it was
i will be inside your heart
then i will see your emotions
laying on the cutting bored
right before i start hacking away with my knife
Disecting
Dominating
your mine for the taking
lets hope the anestia dont wear off
or maybe that it does
this would feel so much better if only you were
Screaming-Begging-Pleading
Mercy is me
My face mask covers my mouth
you cant see me smile
dont close your eyes
look into mine
emotions you never knew you envoked
Pain
Pleasure
so much hate you purposely caused
pupils dialated
medication-medication
your screaming for it
to bad i forgot the morphine
oh shit your going into convulsions
nurse please pass me the syringe
shoot you up with a triple dose of misery
come on baby scream for me
i`m finally in your heart
its so sad you flat lined
----------------------------
waking up in a cold sweat in the waiting room
excuse me sir the doctors waiting
are you ready for your operation

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© 2006 BeautifullyRuined
Published on Saturday, December 30, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • soul dancer On Tuesday, January 2, 2007, soul dancer (96)By person wrote:

    Vicious and scary...I really enjoyed it.

  • Aunty Depressant On Saturday, December 30, 2006, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    hehehehe...much better than thru the stomach...besides they can take me to dinner or cook!(Actually I like to cook..watch em clean is fun tho)You contemplate and torture so well;)

  • A former member wrote: "shoot you up with a triple dose of misery" Jeesh! Talk about wickedly seductive, finally gaining your goal just to watch it die in one way or another. Wow...just wow. ~*Beth*~

  • Mylissa On Saturday, December 30, 2006, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    "i'm finally in your heart it's so sad you flat lined" oh my....AMAZING.

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