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"3:15am"
By Grim_Sorrow
3:15 am
forget
or at least repress
these thoughts
the lingering truths from which I find no solace
take from this
the ideological cries of an amniotic mind
the happenstance popularity
falsity of familiarity
this deception
who am I to deserve such idolatries
this popularity
To say I've earned such fortune is laughable
unequivocal at best
yet here I am
the subtlety of which I speak
of which you read
and yet
this nagging thought of worthlessness
bares no reply
I swim in a sea of inquisition
searching for a hint of truth
understanding
for I fear if I find no answers
I will drown amongst these thoughts of life
these emotions
the only outlet
this page
these words
but what of you
you sit idly by
watching
waiting
reading
bare witness to my sanity
or lack there of
my ever reminiscent reality
for in you
I find truth
the inquisitions make sense
the answers seem clear
and for a moment
the words become more then this
a form of selflessness
drowning thoughts in your memory
taking solace is serenity
the pain fades
the tears dry
and I'm left with nothing but this
a string of words
strewn carelessly across the page
no pattern
no purpose
just freeform sanity
touch and go reality
my freedom
my passion
my ending
3:49 am
all is well
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© 2006 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Sunday, November 19, 2006.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
Wow, This is devastatingly beautiful. I feel I can very much relate to this. I've found myself awake at 3:15am many mornings writing to clear my mind and trying to comprehend the thoughts. Excellent read.
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A former member wrote:
well... your illustrations of discovering meaning beyond the meaningless, the genuine from the artificial... truth from what is false. Always look within
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On Friday, January 12, 2007, glasshouse
(548)
wrote:
It reads like water. Like smoke. Like music. Well written and very intelligent. Overall, impressive indeed. And not even my style so... this is a compliment. -Glass
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A former member wrote:
"for I fear if I find no answers
I will drown amongst these thoughts of life" I can feel this one; interesting format. Well done.
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
familiar in the words you speak......articulate intelligent.......flowing with actualization......well done..........urban
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, carlosjackal
(3021) wrote:
Loved the flow and conclusion to this. Only 4minutes to write? Bloody brilliant!
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, Grim_Sorrow
(75) wrote:
4 minutes? lol ,it took 34 minutes, a bit longer then usual. but it turned out well
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A former member wrote:
4 minutes 34 minutes. Who cares. I liked it
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