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BrOkEn DoLL(you played me)
By BeautifullyRuined
beauty shatters
porceline skin litters the ground
I was your favorite doll
until you broke me
overwhelmed
by your cruelty
I crumbled
eyes the color of water
at sunset
stare up at you
Lifeless
they once held all
your dreams
broken hearts do beat
mines lays pounding
at your feet
porceline dolls do bleed
you can no longer hold me
while you sleep
an original
i was made especially
for you
but you abused me
played with me one
to many times
you destroyed me
Poor little broken doll
I was once a real girl
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© 2006 BeTrAyEd
Comments on "BrOkEn DoLL(you played me)"
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A former member wrote:
amazingly realistic...i was really touched by the 2nd last stanza...wow
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On Friday, November 17, 2006, beautifulfallenangel
(63)
wrote:
:), painfully understood........beautifully written
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A former member wrote:
This was absolutely gorgeous! Great job!
I love the 5th stanza... I love it.
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On Thursday, November 16, 2006, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Beautiful write. I have hope that you will become fixable, dear. Lovely analogy.
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A former member wrote:
Nice. I actually saw this doll.
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