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They Have My Woman
By A Burning God
They have my woman, holding her hostage
they want me for something
They have my woman, raping her
making me enraged
They have my woman, making me show my true form
they want me to die
They have my woman, luring my to my death,
but I cannot die
They have my woman, attempting to halt the chain of events
they will pay with their very lives
They have my woman, and nothing will stop me from recovering what's mine...
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© 2006 The_Demon
Published on Monday, September 4, 2006.
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dei
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wrote:
I just watched Taken, and then Taken 2. So in my head this was read in the voice of Liam Neeson. It was nice.
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On Wednesday, September 13, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
how... wicked. It's nice to heqr from you again.
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On Tuesday, September 5, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
WOWSERS'S Your incredible, the emotional bursting rage just made me want to ravage you! I mean....Awesome poem~Gothic
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A former member wrote:
damn! this is good!
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A former member wrote:
Woah...remind me to never take something away from you. Excellent portrayal of burning rage and all the other emotions Asouldevided touched on here...I'm gonna go cower out of your way now. ~*Beth*~
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On Monday, September 4, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Kill those bastards! I hate it when your ho is taken from you by rampage racoons or whatever there name
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On Monday, September 4, 2006, Asouldivided
(22) wrote:
Hate...Anger...Love...holding... Many Emotions combined in one Work, that for me is already a classic.
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