Dark Reign

By MGood

Skin soaked to pale in sorrow.
Remnants of the fuel that fed our tomorrow,

Streak my face,
And every other place.

Seated here cold, wet and waiting.
Steam rising,

All around,
From the ashes that surround,

Whispers sweetly;
'Forgive me'

I hang my head,
Instead.

Thankful for this sadness.
This salvation from madness.

Under the darkest sky,
You contained the strength that went awry.

Through an endless night,
That turned, and almost burst into day light.

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© 2006 MGood
Published on Tuesday, May 30, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Kick ass, miss!

  • A former member wrote: wow...wat a piece..real gud..

  • Riven Waker On Monday, December 21, 2009, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    highly descriptive language contained in a rythmic pulse - excellent piece

  • A former member wrote: what fills the void of a lost tomorrow... a burning loss perhaps... perhaps more... when sorrow fills the void... humility or guilt.... where does the void end... and something else begin. searching questions awakened here.

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Monday, July 16, 2007, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    great write, great style, very different than what im used to reading, this blew me away, awesome job ~Empty~

  • A former member wrote: very interesting piece. I loved the last line on this. made me smile a minute ][ ][

  • A former member wrote: You set this up so well with your flow and rhyme scheme, and just gave it at the end. Great. ....-samone

  • A former member wrote: i agree with the magic man holy hell

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