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Do Not Read This Poem
By inexperienced
Because it will start with ‘I’
I don’t like the word ‘I’
Look,
I told you that
I would use it....
But since you’ve already started
I have something to tell you:
No more feelings inside me anymore
No good; nor bad
Should I be afraid?
Should I take precautions?
No more decisions to take
No more worries to wonder
Only this, that, these, those
Only have-tos of daily life
No more of me with you
No more of you with me
‘We’ is lost
We are lost.
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© 2006 inexperienced
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, HalfDarkAngel
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wrote:
"'We' is lost, We are lost." I love that.
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On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
You just have that way hun... and whoever part of "we" was, he is a fool! Beautifully sad, and melancholy. Julia~
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On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Tonights Decision
(137) wrote:
talk about creeping ( or lingering) bittersweet melancholy. an i am humbled.
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On Tuesday, June 6, 2006, Lilith
(18) wrote:
wow, incredible. simple, short, but amazing. ~Lilith~
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
I clicked on this one full of skepticism, but that was banished from the start. I am very impressed.
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On Saturday, May 13, 2006, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
fucking amazing. That's all
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On Saturday, May 13, 2006, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
You certainly have an abundance of originality. I love it.
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A former member wrote:
this seems to combine a bit of word play, perhaps linguistic critique, with an expression of loss, of division and unrest... very nicely written!
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A former member wrote:
This is so bittersweet. I remember in school our teachers said try to speak in sentences without using "I", bet you can't. Well they were right, thanks for reflecting that dear little message.
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On Saturday, May 13, 2006, Dei
(665) wrote:
i love the questions. i like this.
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A former member wrote:
this poem describes total honest feelings. i like *-Psyche-*
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