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Exquisite Corpse
By Echo
last night
and each night before
still resonate
as dreams
and nothing more
fingers
lips
tongues
paint a map
that isn't gone
skin on skin
breath on breath
not close enough
heartbeats match
better yet
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© 2006 Echo
Published on Monday, January 9, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Exquisite Corpse"
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Bella Butchery
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wrote:
fucking portrait painted, wonderfull
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A former member wrote:
i really liked this. well done. ~ red.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I think it is perfect the way it is. I read it choppy, I enjoy how that leaves you wanting more.
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On Tuesday, July 17, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
and more. :} Love it.
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On Saturday, February 10, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
It seems unfinished. Maybe that was your intention? In any case, I'm intrigued.
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A former member wrote:
very different. but i liked it. ~ red
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On Monday, January 9, 2006, Myrrhkuri the fallen one
(94) wrote:
interesting
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