reborn

By weyvern

Cold is the hour near night
When an evanescent light
Covers the land then gives in
To the inevitable dark.

Dark is her dreadful state
When she arrives far too late
To save the life of him
Watch his inevitable death.

Without the sun the flour wilts
When natures balance temporarily tilts
Leaving a sleeping world to rest
Ready for the reborn dawn…

Without the air the boy dies
And no matter how hard she tries
No one can prevent a death
But wait for a life reborn.

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© 2005 weyvern
Published on Friday, December 23, 2005.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • blue On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I loved the way this played out, each stanza holding it's own personal truth.. well blended and with purpose. ~b

  • veingo On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    It seems to me, that there could be more to this one. I like the begining, and end though. ^V^

  • A former member wrote: damn you have mad talent

  • weyvern On Saturday, December 24, 2005, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    please tell me what you think of my work i dont mind negative comments i need to know in order to progress

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