Carousel Of Confusion

By MidniteBlaze

I love you
and you love me
I adore you
and you hate me
I still talk to you
you seldom talk to me
what a beautiful place to be
here with you and complete insanity
so I circle around and seach for another...

I like you
you like me
but you do not know what you want
I used to not either
I again probably do not even know myself
because I run into people like you
what a beautiful place to be
here with you and complete insanity
so I circle around and search for another...

I attend to your needs
you could care less

I like you
you do not like me

I hate you
you adore me

I dispise your actions towards me
yet I find out you like me

Too many different scenarios
but all basically the same to me
how beautiful it is to be
with every one of you in complete insanity...

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© 2005 MidniteBlaze
Published on Thursday, December 8, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Err0r On Friday, December 9, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    I love how you counter the phrases throughout this write my friend. This was truly amazing. :)

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, December 9, 2005, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Very true in every outcome, I think. Great write!

  • aCiD aNgEL On Thursday, December 8, 2005, aCiD aNgEL (31)By person wrote:

    wow vic.. beautifully and confusingly written.. :)

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