unsweetened deliberation

By belo desgraca

unsweetened deliberation

You see clocks in my eyes,
Turned forward….
Before I caught a glimpse
Of the second hand
----/---Whisking me away----------

If you see flight scars
On my arms
…Remember…
Looks can be deceiving.
I never once
Took to the sky
(Without you.)


And the curve of my back
Never molded to your chest
Because my wings got in the way.

I was never your angel
But I hoped I could be her someday





Supplies:
Ten minutes, an HB pencil, and a piece of computer paper.

Thank you to the lovely Jes for the poem. And even though I had to deal with your shananigans while trying to come up with one, thank you to the equally lovely Dave for the title. *smile*

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© 2005 belo desgraca
Published on Monday, December 5, 2005.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 28, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Excellent sketch..I hope you keep posting your work, you truly are talented and deserve to go places. Big Thanks go to King Crazy Dave as it was on his profile I discovered thee..Top Banana!

  • Anth On Monday, December 12, 2005, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    gorgeous artwork, and the poem that accompanies it is breathtaking

  • D3ADT0WN On Saturday, December 10, 2005, D3ADT0WN (185)By person wrote:

    This was is pretty cool ~Trev

  • veingo On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    I'm amazed that curves, lines, and shadows, can become something like this. And I'm baffled by your range of style. ^V^

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Realy nice.. the eyes lips and wings were all wonderfull. guess it all are

  • ApathysKiss On Monday, December 5, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    elegant and sexy, my fave features are her lips and bone structure....lovely work. ~m

  • ApathysKiss On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    and crap i just noticed the poem, silly me...heart-wrenching end...'And the curve of my back Never molded to your chest Because my wings got in the way. I was never your angel But I hoped I could be her someday.' tear.

  • glasshouse On Monday, December 5, 2005, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    haha. dave's a loser. ans muchly hated. your art is amazing. i'm grateful to even be near it. i adore you. -Glass

  • A former member wrote: i still think the title should be "alanis morrisette when she was hot with a horribly dislocated shoulder standing in front of an enormous puzzle piece"

  • A former member wrote: wonderful you two, i love it.

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