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"suggestions please"...
By Myrrhkuri the fallen one
When I was young,
life was more fun
but I still did not fit in.
Played by myself,
heart on a shelf
other kids laughed at my name.
I've been waiting,
over rating
how I'll be this special man.
No one sees me,
or believes me
no one knows just who I am.
No one hears me,
or comes near me
no one cares to know the man.
I grew older,
my heart grew colder
I started doubting my lifes worth.
I'm a cutter,
lost in the gutter
I'm a dark and evil soul.
I've gone crazy,
my eyes are hazy
I have let myself run down.
wish upon stars,
to take all my scars
so I can finally be loved.
I don't know why,
people don't cry
when they see that no one cares.
Now that I've seen my darker side,
I'll keep it locked up deep inside.
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© 2005 Myrrhkuri the fallen one
Comments on ""suggestions please"..."
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A former member wrote:
Very good and most people can relate that they felt that way someday...
remember kids can be cruel* but it helps you to realize what type of person you never want to be*
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A former member wrote:
i agree with veingo and tcq. the realation this has to my life is absoulutly terifying. the worst part is that i am still like this. but that is slowly changing now that i have found my only love. i can tell you that it is something you will reqognize at once. it is imposible to explain. on that note, this is a wondefull peice and i am glad to have had a chance to read it. great work.
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On Sunday, December 4, 2005, veingo
(526)
wrote:
Sounds like me, (once) I wouldn't wish it on anyone. Great write. Way to get it out. ^V^
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On Friday, December 2, 2005, Wolk
(54) wrote:
Put up a band and start flaming metal in the stages
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On Friday, December 2, 2005, Wolk
(54) wrote:
Your kidding right? You remind me the fairy tale of a troll that is cold in the woods and he scares children near the woods. Then he cries on his stone and the children ask to play with him and he is all happy. But man with a guitar skills and age to drin
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A former member wrote:
Darling, true evil does not seek serenity..it lies there, in its darkness..be freed of your demons and those others' blindness has chained to you..you've a gorgeous spirit. It is a shame to flee from.
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On Monday, November 28, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
This just tore every last shred of my heart into pieces.. I relate to so much of it, it's almost scary.
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