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Through My Eyes (pt. 4 )
By Myrrhkuri the fallen one
Through my eyes I see good-byes
darkened thoughts and secret lies.
Through my eyes I see the strain
caused by misery, heartbreak and pain.
Through my eyes I never see
the good things people think of me.
Through my eyes I hope to see
the day my life is gone from me.
3-29-2004
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© 2005 Myrrhkuri the fallen one
Published on Tuesday, November 22, 2005.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, veingo
(533)
wrote:
YES!, I have an idea. It's the flow, of these. I did make note of the dates, and they can each stand well alone. But,
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On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, veingo
(533) wrote:
even though the stanzas don't match exactly; in order, and all together, this would make one kick-ass write. My "No reason" series is 3 stories about 1 person, but they could never make one great poem. Sweet! ^V^
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A former member wrote:
They just get better with each addition...another wonderful piece from you. (And oh, how I've come to love your works!) *Evangel*
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