Fog (illusion)

By Echo

Your broken image of me shatters my soul into an infinite number of jagged shards. As that image ravages my soul blood starts to flow. I begin to enjoy it as you revel in a deep haze of fog and blood. I fall further into the haze as your soul begins to bleed. Together we dissapear into a flawless and imperfect dream forever.

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© 2005 Echo
Published on Thursday, November 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • beautifulfallenangel On Wednesday, November 1, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (62)By person wrote:

    and broken down again, i fear i may understand this piece..deep in the sparse and souless.........BEAUTIFUL

  • A former member wrote: violent yet quietly soothing...

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