Smoke and glass (My example)
By veingo
Eventualy,
After the stun, and shock of the loss.
Thoughts start to drift away from the searing past.
Through the numbness that is, now.
And into the wrinkled glass, and smoke thick enough to choke dragons.
You wonder what is possable?
What is only fantasy?
And what just may be, your most welcome comfort.
Maybe someone you've known for a long time,
but suddenly seen in a different light.
With whom you've made small-talk over and over.
Then suddenly, they said something meaningful.
You want what you want,
but the world is complicated.
Full of smokescreens, glass ceilings,
and significant others.
It's easier to just get lost in the day by day.
So why hold on to hope for the future?
Because I am certain that once,
we saw each other clearly,
through the wrinkled glass,
and smoke thick enough to choke dragons.
Comments on "Smoke and glass (My example)"
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A former member wrote:
Those moments of brief clarity always turn to into haze, for me. Nice analogies.
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On Monday, January 10, 2011, SulaMoon
(67) wrote:
Beautifully stated.
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On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mord
(35) wrote:
Getting lost in the day by day holds sanity sometimes. Nice write I can relate.
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A former member wrote:
it seems to me that you went through a bit of bad all for a mall glimer of hope, I wonder, are you an optimist?
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On Sunday, December 4, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
Good question..................I have no idea.
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A former member wrote:
It is funny how people change, a sweet and sad write.
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A former member wrote:
love the last line
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A former member wrote:
wow. this was beautiful. metaphorical bliss. you drug me under with your words. it was a pleasure reading this. don't mind if i read more. haha. nicely done.
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A former member wrote:
..intricate last stanza; would that we could see everyone clearly; maybe the unseen would become obsolete? lovely verse
~ness~
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A former member wrote:
It is sad when someone you know becomes someone that you once knew...and to look back at what you had...is one of the most painful emotions ever. This is a beautiful write, as all your other pieces are. Looking forward to the next. *Evangel*
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On Sunday, October 9, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
Evangel, you are so sweet. I hope I never disappoint you.*V*