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Without You
By Savannah
Acid rain keeps falling,
And these clouds are so damn dark.
My candle sheds no light here,
Without you in my heart.
This coffin that surrounds me,
Inside this empty tomb,
Is warmer than the rain outside.
Please end this suffering soon.
It's lonely here without you,
And I cannot stop the rain.
Just whisper that you love me,
So these clouds will part again.
Your kiss can bring the sun back,
And your voice can calm the sea.
Please stop this storm forever,
By just coming back to me.
The wind is getting stronger,
And the Reaper holds my soul.
I remain here in this coffin,
To take refuge from the cold.
It's lonely here without you.
Death has merely dulled the pain.
Just whisper that you love me,
So that I may live again.
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Copyright 2005 Savannah
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On Thursday, May 26, 2011, Nameless Pariah
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wrote:
This reminds me of a song called Emily Not, Not Gone. Can love conquer death? Is there really such a love so strong? Dark and lovely poem.
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely beautiful... I must read more of your works... ;)
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On Friday, August 12, 2005, FlashDark
(18) wrote:
so good to see another poem its been almost three months...last time i heard from you. you werent doing too well...was worried about you...oh BTW another hearfelt, beautiful, work of art. great structure and imagry...
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On Friday, August 5, 2005, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
heartbreaking and crushing, such feeling overflowing from this, helpless to avoid the flood....nicely done
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