Die Darling
By Ablebody Peckawood
She could not fathom the depth of my love. She could not concieve the
degree of my dark confused emotions.
That tender young bitch just had to die! There were no tears of sorrow
that I cried.
The years of her constant taunting and teasing. The hours that I spent
watching her through her window. Carressing and undressing other men in
the pale moonlight.
Her fears were realized when she finally told me she would not be mine!
To her I give one last toast for she will do none of that any more.
Now the blood I can taste, from the knife that she takes. As she lies
dead from my hate no remorse!
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Copyright 2005 Ablebody Peckawood
Published on Thursday, May 26, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, August 5, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Wicked write.
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On Friday, July 29, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
hehehe. you really do write with your heart on your sleeve... no wait... with someone else's heart on your sleeve (as well as general gore) :D
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, down-sx-ft
(46) wrote:
FUCKING AWESOME!!! Makes me think of my ex
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A former member wrote:
wow thats pretty damn brutal
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A former member wrote:
excellent, I could really feel your emotions as I read; it's beautiful.
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On Monday, May 30, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
swirling with dark emotions...~She could not fathom the depth of my love~ i love that line...well done ~kristy
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On Monday, May 30, 2005, InsipidTouch
(32) wrote:
That just fucking rocks, dude. You can really picture your emotions and what's going on. It's beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
Well... damn:p Tell us how you really feel ;) Sweet write. ~Ship!
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, PaperPromises
(53) wrote:
Harsh.. but then reality is.. so I say very well done, especially on wording your feelings.. I spot lots of talent in these lines -Cor
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
OH, so very harsh.. angry. you did well to portray your feelings here
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
thats awesome..so powerful, kinda frightening..but i like ur style! welcome 2 DP! good to have ya aboard -Kel
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood
(38) wrote:
Well thank you so much!
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood
(38) wrote:
I love it love and murder! What more could you want.