Die Darling

By Ablebody Peckawood

She could not fathom the depth of my love. She could not concieve the degree of my dark confused emotions.
That tender young bitch just had to die! There were no tears of sorrow that I cried.
The years of her constant taunting and teasing. The hours that I spent watching her through her window. Carressing and undressing other men in the pale moonlight.
Her fears were realized when she finally told me she would not be mine!
To her I give one last toast for she will do none of that any more.
Now the blood I can taste, from the knife that she takes. As she lies dead from my hate no remorse!

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Copyright 2005 Ablebody Peckawood
Published on Thursday, May 26, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • island warrior On Friday, August 5, 2005, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Wicked write.

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, July 29, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    hehehe. you really do write with your heart on your sleeve... no wait... with someone else's heart on your sleeve (as well as general gore) :D

  • down-sx-ft On Thursday, July 7, 2005, down-sx-ft (46)By person wrote:

    FUCKING AWESOME!!! Makes me think of my ex

  • A former member wrote: wow thats pretty damn brutal

  • A former member wrote: excellent, I could really feel your emotions as I read; it's beautiful.

  • Sin On Monday, May 30, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    swirling with dark emotions...~She could not fathom the depth of my love~ i love that line...well done ~kristy

  • InsipidTouch On Monday, May 30, 2005, InsipidTouch (32)By person wrote:

    That just fucking rocks, dude. You can really picture your emotions and what's going on. It's beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: Well... damn:p Tell us how you really feel ;) Sweet write. ~Ship!

  • PaperPromises On Thursday, May 26, 2005, PaperPromises (54)By person wrote:

    Harsh.. but then reality is.. so I say very well done, especially on wording your feelings.. I spot lots of talent in these lines -Cor

  • Dei On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    OH, so very harsh.. angry. you did well to portray your feelings here

  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    thats awesome..so powerful, kinda frightening..but i like ur style! welcome 2 DP! good to have ya aboard -Kel

  • Ablebody Peckawood On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood (38)By person wrote:

    Well thank you so much!

  • Ablebody Peckawood On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood (38)By person wrote:

    I love it love and murder! What more could you want.

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