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"Weak At Heart"
By Grim_Sorrow
These Hapless Cries
Despondent Whims
And Woefull Melodies
Languishing Ipseity
This Agony
Utter Fallacy
Depreciated
Emotions Usurped
Faded
Lost To This
Our Tragedy
And Withal,
Now
And Always
A Plastic Facade
Forcibly Sealed
Locked Away
Ever Changing
Adapting
Accepting
These Words
Our World
This Pain
And Yet
Despite These Truths
Forced Thought
And Forgone Ability
This Being
Ever Knowing
Will Never Welcome
His Honest
Undying
Vulnerability
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Copyright 2005 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Monday, May 16, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on ""Weak At Heart""
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On Tuesday, June 7, 2005, sIo
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wrote:
yeah .....i have no idea what the hell any of that meant. but it was pretty sounding :)
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On Thursday, May 19, 2005, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
"languishing ipseity"...great line and loved your word usage...felt like falling in an easy yet diligent decent through this...the ending hard yet honest...great work
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On Tuesday, May 17, 2005, Dysphoria
(88) wrote:
seeing as how i have nothing intelligent to say, i liked it! =D -Justina
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On Tuesday, May 17, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
I like the whole goshdarn thing. Great write, ~*~TarT~*~
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A former member wrote:
"A Plastic Facade, Forcibly Sealed, Locked Away" - I liked that part a lot. Nice.
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