"I Love You"

By Grim_Sorrow

How Is It
Your So Called Sanity
Forged By The Fires of Deception
Forgo's All Logic
All Sense Of Reason
And Yet
Still
Holding True
This Forlorn Tragedy
A Precursor To The Contretempts Yet To Come
I Wait
This Wire Frame
Picked Clean
Devoid Of Dubiety,
A Nieve Mind
Lost within This Fantasm of Harmony
Dreaming Of Years To Come
The Good, The Bad
Never Expecting
Never Knowing
This Final Thought
Lost Within
Unspoken
Unheard
Until Now

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Copyright 2005 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Sunday, May 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Thursday, May 11, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    if only there were words

  • abattoir On Tuesday, September 6, 2005, abattoir (115)By person wrote:

    I really fuckin love the way you wrap it up in the end...it's going to take me awhile, but I'm reading all of your work, bad ass. abattoir

  • A former member wrote: that was very good. i liked how you put it. all around good job.

  • Dei On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    i think this is your best yet

  • tormentedsoul666 On Sunday, May 1, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    wow this is so beautiful!!! i love it!!!

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, May 1, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    lovely!

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