Sucked Dry

By MidniteBlaze

The great feeling of you next to me
you love to do what you do
you all do
and I have lost my mind
I have lost everything
needles pierce the heart
knives stabbed into my back
I was sold out
best friends are not what they are meant to be
and love has gone to shit
nothing I do or say fixes anything
I give my heart and I get knocked over in return
is there nobody out there who cares
is there nobody who can just simply hear me out anymore
I feel forgotten unless needed for something
I feel like an object
I cannot seem to talk to anyone
I keep telling myself not to let it build up
but I continue to
I have broken down several times lately
but not in a fit of rage
but swarmed all in my own tears
I cannot stop
the most vital things I have in life are slipping away
slowly I'll have nothing
I never want to take it out on anyone but myself
I swore never to again
in any way shape or form
I cannot bear witness anymore to my own self suffering
once being able to look in the mirror and be proud
and now I see nothing
I see a tainted soul
I remain speechless as I stare up in the sky again
still searching for someone who really cares
no faith anymore but I still look above and ask above
one simple question I will continue to ask
Why?

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Copyright 2005 MidniteBlaze
Published on Sunday, April 17, 2005.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Sex Slave On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Sex Slave (78)By person wrote:

    some people like myself go to the same thing everyday.....i just want to say thanx because you just said what Ive beening trying to say for years.-Danny

  • Sticky Kitty On Sunday, June 19, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    I expected another bitched-ass, whiny poem but this was the exact opposite. It was truth, honesty, emotion and everything I didn't expect. this was unbelievable. Lovely. -kitty

  • Mahakala On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Mahakala (209)By person wrote:

    yep...i know what it's like to go throught that shit...wait come to think of it i'm still going through it...but any ways i like your poem...

  • FlashDark On Saturday, April 23, 2005, FlashDark (18)By person wrote:

    i know all too well of this great write.

  • Dei On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    "sucked dry"... i hear ya

  • Soulfire On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Soulfire (97)By person wrote:

    I feel this way too. Do ever feel like your friends aren't listening they are just waiting for their turn to talk! Great poem.

  • A former member wrote: i really like this

  • A former member wrote: A LOT

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