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Dirty Lymerick #8
By AbjectColloquialist
There once was a man from France
Who was often seen without his pants
When he would go out
He'd show his trouser trout
And for a dollar, he'd make it dance
Wha-Cha!
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Copyright 2005 AbjectColloquialist
Published on Sunday, March 20, 2005.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Dirty Lymerick #8"
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A former member wrote:
The last line implies people were more than willing to see it dance... ;)
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On Saturday, October 1, 2005, SilentStalker
(1066)
wrote:
...there once was a man from Versailles; who shot off in every girl's eye; In pornos he screwed; till Peter North sued; And now he just aims for the thigh...
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On Monday, June 12, 2006, dp_whipping_girl
(235) wrote:
darun darun, so sick and sweet :) ~pf
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On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
LOL
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On Saturday, October 1, 2005, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
(36) wrote:
I love the Wha-cha!...it completes it..to show absolute insanity...lol..but you never know I could just be a crazy old lady....
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On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, Soulfire
(97) wrote:
HA HA HA HA HA....FUNNY SHIT.
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
funny shit, to bad i didnt see it before....*laughs*
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A former member wrote:
good job, what I see in this poem is a man,a troubled, poor man who is lost in life, searching for a purpose that allways seems just out of reach, and trys finding happiness in entertianing the masses hoping that in some way their joy will somehow validat
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A former member wrote:
validate his pointless existance, but never finding that witch he has allways sought.....Exceptance, yes that is what I beleive is the overall presance and fell this poem gives to me..... oh woe the the man and his trouser trout
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On Sunday, March 20, 2005, AbjectColloquialist
(32) wrote:
Oh... My... Gosh. You Hit the Nail on the proverbial Head! And the fact that your comment is ten times longer than the piece is fantastic!
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On Sunday, March 20, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
:0)
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On Sunday, March 20, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
haha, that kicked ass, funny stuff. ^_^
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On Sunday, March 20, 2005, manywalks
(750) wrote:
the qha=cha was a perfect touch. And since i'm a dirty old woman i giggled and snorted.
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On Sunday, March 20, 2005, A Broken Soul
(81) wrote:
well, you made me giggle like a dirty french man, and that says a lot! lofl. ^autumn^
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A former member wrote:
I'll show YOU a dirty limerick! --- but not really! cute piece :) - Rawk
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