Good Morning

By Nihilitis

A reverse panorama it was—
to my dissatisfaction,
an abysmal aberration.(eek, it rhymes)
Like those romances,
ludicrously full of bliss
and thoughtless affection.
I had always been one to abhor clichés,
yet nothing less could’ve served me justice.
Such madness. All over a petty meme.

Her pale ivory skin,
her hair like tarnished gold—

On my lap she sat, my body
strewn in a slack over a wretched couch.
I looked upon her crooked lips
and yearned for their warmth…

She was mad, but I hadn’t any restraint myself.

A piercing intermittent beep
broke the solitude of our union—

I silenced the villain, but it was too late.

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Copyright 2005 headbanger4554
Published on Saturday, March 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ShardsofSilence On Thursday, March 31, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219)By person wrote:

    brilliant write

  • A former member wrote: wow dude, that's some good shit. hey man, who needs rhyme? everybody's gotta do what they gotta do, and you do it well. awesome write

  • happilydepressed On Monday, March 21, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    awesome write

  • A former member wrote: Nice. Beyond words, actually. I can't grasp what this made me think - Well, not enough to call it knowledge any way. Thank you.

  • elisa On Saturday, March 19, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    sounds like a moment so unbelievably perfect....you begin pondering thoughts filled with doubt......and then the alarm goes, giving a feeling of being caught in between reality and a dream...that's my take:)elisa

  • Nihilitis On Sunday, March 20, 2005, Nihilitis (7)By person wrote:

    Ahh, cookie for you, mademoiselle. : D

  • blue On Saturday, March 19, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    haha! Yes! ..that was so great..Loved it I did...wonderful writing here...you played the lines perfectly. :) ~b

  • Northstar On Saturday, March 19, 2005, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    I love this piece--it has such a hard-to-place feel to it---very nicely done

  • Nihilitis On Saturday, March 19, 2005, Nihilitis (7)By person wrote:

    Thank you. I've been hoping for a while for somebody to get the elusive plot though. First one to do it gets a cookie. :)

  • purr_verse On Saturday, March 19, 2005, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    dammit. I love the feel of it, but I very much doubt I'm getting a cookie. At first I though 'she' was a cigarette, but the crooked lips part threw me off that one... Thought-provoking in a great way, even if my thoughts this morning aren't entirely up

  • purr_verse On Saturday, March 19, 2005, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    to the job. But I do like your style.

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