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Good Morning
By Nihilitis
A reverse panorama it was—
to my dissatisfaction,
an abysmal aberration.(eek, it rhymes)
Like those romances,
ludicrously full of bliss
and thoughtless affection.
I had always been one to abhor clichés,
yet nothing less could’ve served me justice.
Such madness. All over a petty meme.
Her pale ivory skin,
her hair like tarnished gold—
On my lap she sat, my body
strewn in a slack over a wretched couch.
I looked upon her crooked lips
and yearned for their warmth…
She was mad, but I hadn’t any restraint myself.
A piercing intermittent beep
broke the solitude of our union—
I silenced the villain, but it was too late.
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Copyright 2005 headbanger4554
Published on Saturday, March 19, 2005.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Good Morning"
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222)
wrote:
brilliant write
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A former member wrote:
wow dude, that's some good shit. hey man, who needs rhyme? everybody's gotta do what they gotta do, and you do it well. awesome write
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
awesome write
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A former member wrote:
Nice. Beyond words, actually. I can't grasp what this made me think - Well, not enough to call it knowledge any way. Thank you.
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
sounds like a moment so unbelievably perfect....you begin pondering thoughts filled with doubt......and then the alarm goes, giving a feeling of being caught in between reality and a dream...that's my take:)elisa
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On Sunday, March 20, 2005, Nihilitis
(7) wrote:
Ahh, cookie for you, mademoiselle. : D
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
haha! Yes! ..that was so great..Loved it I did...wonderful writing here...you played the lines perfectly. :) ~b
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, Northstar
(375) wrote:
I love this piece--it has such a hard-to-place feel to it---very nicely done
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, Nihilitis
(7) wrote:
Thank you. I've been hoping for a while for somebody to get the elusive plot though. First one to do it gets a cookie. :)
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
dammit. I love the feel of it, but I very much doubt I'm getting a cookie. At first I though 'she' was a cigarette, but the crooked lips part threw me off that one... Thought-provoking in a great way, even if my thoughts this morning aren't entirely up
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
to the job. But I do like your style.
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