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Broken Wings (old poem)
By Spiritus_Frumenti
If it ever mattered to forget,
The significance of a broken promise
Does it mean I can learn to regret,
The damage of a certain silence?
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If I ever made the mistake,
Of filling my life with hate
Does it mean I can live each day,
Denying that I have been crying?…
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Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2003
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A Look into the Past
Published on Monday, March 14, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, mywristshurt
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wrote:
even though it was a small poem, it held a lot of meaning
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wow this is amazing. It really makes you think. :) ~Unlucky
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
*smiles* you have grown, but not overly much, you still retain that wonderful poise and effortless breath as is seen here...this is slightly more in your face than your others...nonetheless it is still wonderfully written indeed
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On Monday, March 14, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
this was a tad confusing,possibly just too deep for my mind heh. well done.
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