Red
By NeverMore
Clouds of crimson crash to Earth,
Staining my colors,
Shattering my hopes.
The sky cries as it falls, dropping
Its red tears on my face.
Red-
The color of love,
The shade of passion,
Rolling down my cheek,
Choking my entire world.
Time ceases itself for me
In the most sweet and
Sadistically cruel way.
The feeling burns in my chest,
The new pain for the ages.
Love was found in the last place
I looked-
She was hiding behind the clouds,
Fluttering amongst the gorgeous
Blue sky.
I asked her for my first kiss
Of real desire.
She responded by obliterating
My once beautiful world, my
Fragile existance.
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Copyright 2005 NeverMore
Published on Thursday, February 24, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
You NeverMore, are very talented, I like the personification of the sky, its an amazing peice, truly
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Damn, you've really grasped the tempo and reach of the written word. Each write of yours plays out wonderfully, complete. You've got something special. ~b
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A former member wrote:
wow, that sucks a whole lot, but i know where you're coming from.
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On Sunday, February 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
beautifully expressed pain...one i can relate to at this moment....nice job
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On Thursday, February 24, 2005, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
I found this devastating in its pain... beautiful
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A former member wrote:
I love the idea and concept here.. The last three lines were most wonderful.
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On Thursday, February 24, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
oh this was nice....harsh in the beginning with a soft middle, then ripping you down. awesome job.