Blindsight

I awoke this morning without eyes
I had lost them—in a dream
They were carried away on a current of lies
To drown—in a dissembling stream

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Published on Saturday, February 12, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Blindsight"

On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Philla (95) wrote:

Short and to the point. Oh the power of the written word, right? *grins* Love it. -*Philla*-
On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, Serenity (469) wrote:

Short and beauitful
On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, Savannah (218) wrote:

WOW. The first line of this poem just absolutely hit me in the face! Few words, but damn well said.
On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (54) wrote:

Short and sweet, well, not really sweet, but good. Nice write.
On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, AniDayz (812) wrote:

ahhh...*brilliant* i am speechless...but please know i completely enjoyed this. ill have to come back and leave a better comment...when i gather my head ...
On Saturday, February 12, 2005, K_Love (525) wrote:

"They were carried away on a current of lies To drown—in a dissembling stream" --Incredible line, I really enjoyed this, wonderful job.
A former member wrote: What an intricate and finely woven write.
On Saturday, February 12, 2005, lordshadow (153) wrote:

very short, but awesome nonetheless... well done.