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Just tell me why
By CrOsSeD N BoUnD
Why must you yell at me
why must you speak
why am i so pathetic
why am i so weak?
why do they fight
why do they scream
why do walls crumble
why do they lean
why are we born
why do we die
why is it so hard
staying alive
why do you smile
when i lose control
why do you torture
this tormented soul
why do you love me
why do you care
why did you leave me
this isn't fair
why did you go
to a better place
you left me with nothing
but tears on my face
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Copyright 2005 TeArS_of_Sorrow
Published on Monday, February 7, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Just tell me why"
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A former member wrote:
that was great
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A former member wrote:
i wish i could put as much meaning into word with so few of them like you do, your poems are just plain cool, keep it up!->
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151)
wrote:
great write. I can relate in a way. :) ~Unlucky
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Very flowing, like water over a waterfall. Stick around, you are great!
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, A Broken Soul
(81) wrote:
excellent write! i ask the same questions... stick around dp, i like your style! ^Autumn^
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A former member wrote:
wow, great write write. this was so emotional, and it flows so well. ....................-samone
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Nice write, It flows well. -fairy
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A former member wrote:
wow... i'm glad that you commented otherwise i might not have been able to comment on this. its great! though it has a simple rhyming scheme, it works well...
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
it flows so beautifully. awesome write
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
*behind*not nehind.;)
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
excellent flow. and wonderful wording...such powerful questions...all versed so well here. great write,and great idea nehind this. it provokes serious emotion.
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, island warrior
(210) wrote:
Great flow .Well written
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD
(45) wrote:
yeah. . thanks crimson.
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
heart wrenching write.....your almost too good for this site! hehe ~AoD
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