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RoArKe'S ReGrEt
By CrOsSeD N BoUnD
As I sit here and slit my wrists
My veins get tight as I form a fist
It aches so bad as I move it back and forth
And they said, "this is all your life is worth"
My whole life flashes before my eyes
I see all of the truth, and all of the lies
Then I see my blood drip to the floor
I then became startled by the knock at the door
The door bursts open, my sister comes in
She yells, "Dont be like your father, suicide's a sin"
I looked her in the eyes and asked, "is this my fate?"
I fell to my knees and screamed, "you're too late"
She held my hand and let out a prayer
"why didnt you stop him god, this isn't fair"
I wonder why I picked up that knife
Dont be like me, I screwed up my life
Where were you god when I chose the wrong path
You're supposed to guide me, but you let me crash
Judgment day is coming, what do I say
please send me back god, I made a mistake. . .
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Copyright 2005 TeArS_of_Sorrow
Published on Sunday, February 6, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, April 8, 2009, The Crimson Queen
(918)
wrote:
I'll miss you.
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On Wednesday, November 9, 2005, to love a psycho
(19) wrote:
I'm not lettign Crimson take all credit for loving you cause i do to, just not in the same way that i used to, but it's all the same.
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A former member wrote:
Very powerful. I felt as though I was in the room with the with them.
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On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
the first and last stanzas are amazing.
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On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
if you EVER EVER do this again..i will have someone kick your frickin ass!! you know how much we love you, ya freak! so stick around a while.
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Great poem. You captured the emotion very well. Definately on my faves.~Unlucky
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A former member wrote:
i third lordshadow most poems like this seem like a cry for attention this one had a messege in it that was very well exspresed ~~GOTHIC~~
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Dr Benway
(48) wrote:
Ya, I second Lordshaow, most Cutting/suicide stuff makes me gag or laugh, but I really liked this one. I hope to read more from you.
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
arent you glad I made you read this? hehe
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
I'm with lordshadow, I commend you on this work:) welcome to dp
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On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
Usually, I absolutely despise cutting poems... but I said usually. I actually enjoyed this very very much. I thought it came right from the heart and wasn't an attempt at attention like most. Very nicely done... excellent.
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, Dr Benway
(48) wrote:
I don't think a poem has ever made it grit my teeth before, I can really feel this, thank you.
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
powerful shit. it flows so smoothly and i love your writing style. nice
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On Monday, February 7, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD
(45) wrote:
thanks crimson. this is my first 'meaningful' poem.
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On Sunday, February 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
I think I read this one in your notebook already...its great!! i love you man! hehe ~AoD
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