Unreal Love

By Trail of Fiends

Let me crown you
Let me steal a carcass
Celebrate on a graveyard
Let me take you to the ecstasy
Dig a hole in Mercury
Let me kiss your blood
Travel in space on golden horses
Let me touch your hair of heaven’s mill
Sleeping as one in a giant shell
Let me hear you sweet whisper
Sing in the moonlight with bats
Let me freak and be free
Sharing spicy gifts and love bites
Let me cut your wings of a fallen angel
So that you can fall into an eternal abyss with me
Let me love you blindly
And kill you when I’m done
And revive you when I miss

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Published on Friday, January 21, 2005. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Unreal Love"

A former member wrote: It's twisted and beautiful, awesome imagery! great write
On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Dommi (95) wrote:

aw... that was so romantic, in a dark kinda way. great work :)
On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Serenity (469) wrote:

Damn. Aren't you the romantic one. Love it! :)
On Thursday, January 27, 2005, knightmirror (426) wrote:

man...thank you so much for bringing your talent to dp and allowing us to partake in your brilliance....-knight
On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

Nah, thank you for those praising words. But I'm not some kind of poet monster. ;)
On Saturday, January 22, 2005, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

surreal so real - my favourite. :) Gorgeous, wild write. Just marvel.lous.
On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

For what I see you like my "romantic" poems. Nice. I wrote this to my ex gf Stefanie 4 years ago. Nice to see that the apreciation for this work is still intact.
On Friday, January 21, 2005, AniDayz (812) wrote:

vivid imagery all the way thru this lovely//dark enchantment...*very evoking piece*
On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

Girls love this work. I must figure out why. Obrigado ;)