Transition stained with blood

By Trail of Fiends

Sketches of you in the mirrors
Illuminating the four corners
Refining my senses
Tuning my heart
While you embellish this rough air
Without life, without colour
Into a recondite place in your mind
Of silver trees and golden grass
Adapted, I seek you
You whisper in the breeze, casting me
Animals of twisted forms sing
Throwing black roses to shape my destiny
I arrive bewitched
You approach stretching your hand
Slowly in my heart
Penetrating...
Bleeding...
My heart in your hand struggling
Your eyes change to complete blackness
And the animals show machiavellian smiles
Dancing over a dark soil with a wind of ashes
Your world changes while I fall
Tumbling in a nest of demons
Consumed to the last pore
My blood drops grow to poisoned crops
To only feed you

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Published on Tuesday, January 18, 2005. Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Transition stained with blood"

On Monday, June 11, 2007, Eric (77) wrote:

Really good write! Loved this.
On Saturday, August 13, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357) wrote:

wickedly good... dying a thousand deaths only to be reborn for Her dark pleasure... crucified and helpless yet still seeking the satisfaction of Her gaze... a terrible addiction/affliction...
On Friday, May 20, 2005, Grim_Sorrow (74) wrote:

Hmm... Good Write...
On Saturday, February 12, 2005, Zara Synn (57) wrote:

Wow...they were right in the chatbox, this is good stuff =) I really loved the last two lines...awesome work.
On Saturday, January 29, 2005, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

marvellous work; such vivid language with a lovely sinister snarl, and beauty still through the shadows of your words. Simply excellent write.
A former member wrote: fantastic
On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

:)
On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Blood of Winter (296) wrote:

wonderful work...the imagery is amazing
On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

apreciated.
On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, knightmirror (426) wrote:

great piece again....i will comment better later...but great job...-knight
On Thursday, January 27, 2005, knightmirror (426) wrote:

told you i'd be back.....and still i can think of nothing intelligent to say....except....incredible work...wow...****-knight
On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

looking forward, thanks.
On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37) wrote:

Nah, it's not about what you're thinking :D The end in fact is violent. Means treason. Or just a simple fictional story. Depends of your perspective.
On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Sepulcrawl (78) wrote:

Haha, why do I know what this was about? ;] I liked the progression towards utter ejaculation. Perhaps in future I will glean something from it.. but for now, I am oblivious to any of it's propositions.