Desolate Quandary

By Spiritus_Frumenti

Could I hear you speaking,
In tongues unraveling infinity
Waking mountains of time,
Standing high,
High right next to heaven?

So much for love,
Weeping cancerous notes of silence
Filling voids dying too soon on my hands

Could I live without our eyes meeting again?
Knowing the wind has touched them, somewhere distant,
As the nights seem quieter
Almost like the world wants me to hear you whisper
Whisper how you loved me once
How you will never find,
Someone who will dream forever just like you

I remain lifeless
By those same mountains of time
Hearing but myself cry
Standing high,
High right next to heaven...

Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004





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Published on Wednesday, January 5, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Solace On Monday, January 10, 2005, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    And they clasped hands in infinity, if only he never gave up that moment in time...Brilliant to such an extent that I will cherish this moment, and never give the moment up...

  • A former member wrote: beautifully written

  • Sin On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this read like a dream and left images of a lonely desolate mountain dancing before my eyes, you have such a lovely way of expressing your emotions ~kristy

  • ShadowFlight On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    Maybe I'm reading this wrong, but I find it oddly comforting... an alone, but not lonely. Very nice write

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