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crying shame
By icyhott
*i know this isnt really a poem but i still like it*
wind: i wish it would rain
girl: i want a storm...
girl: one like no other that michigan has seen before
girl: i want to walk out into it and become lost
girl: i want it to take me away to where i truly belong and give me my
clean start in a place where i am well off
wind: mmm....that sounds good
girl: i miss storms as they once were
girl: i remember storms that would last forever ones that were dangerous,
but now they are far too weak and short to suit my liking
wind: yes, well it seems humanity has corrupted them too much to have them
let go; open their flood gates and show their true beauty
girl: its so sad that everyone hates storms and wills them to be so small...
wind: yes its a real shame no one sees their glory whilst they cover their
heads with their sweaty crumpled sheets
wind: ...a true crying shame
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Copyright 2005 icyhott
Published on Tuesday, January 4, 2005.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "crying shame"
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On Friday, May 13, 2005, Cinn
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wrote:
This was definately cool. The whole thing with storms is true though, litterally and as an analogy. Nicely done. -Cinn
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On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i really like the concept here; very impressively done indeed - like a snapshot of thought somehow... Great stuff, anyway. :)
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On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
:):):) This was a truly refreshing piece!! Well done!!!! ~b
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On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Original, unique, and not the same ol' stuff you read here on a daily basis. Wonderful. You are quite talented.
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
It's a poem if you call it one ;) Very well done... I like this one a lot; there's nothing more fun than an original style.
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On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, sIo
(926) wrote:
i actually really like this. this is pretty freaking awesome. i can relate.
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