crying shame

By icyhott

*i know this isnt really a poem but i still like it*

wind: i wish it would rain

girl: i want a storm...

girl: one like no other that michigan has seen before

girl: i want to walk out into it and become lost

girl: i want it to take me away to where i truly belong and give me my clean start in a place where i am well off

wind: mmm....that sounds good

girl: i miss storms as they once were

girl: i remember storms that would last forever ones that were dangerous, but now they are far too weak and short to suit my liking

wind: yes, well it seems humanity has corrupted them too much to have them let go; open their flood gates and show their true beauty

girl: its so sad that everyone hates storms and wills them to be so small...

wind: yes its a real shame no one sees their glory whilst they cover their heads with their sweaty crumpled sheets

wind: ...a true crying shame

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Published on Tuesday, January 4, 2005. Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Comments on "crying shame"

On Friday, May 13, 2005, Cinn (152) wrote:

This was definately cool. The whole thing with storms is true though, litterally and as an analogy. Nicely done. -Cinn
On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

i really like the concept here; very impressively done indeed - like a snapshot of thought somehow... Great stuff, anyway. :)
On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, blue (1409) wrote:

:):):) This was a truly refreshing piece!! Well done!!!! ~b
On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, lordshadow (153) wrote:

I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Original, unique, and not the same ol' stuff you read here on a daily basis. Wonderful. You are quite talented.
On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, stormtalk (727) wrote:

It's a poem if you call it one ;) Very well done... I like this one a lot; there's nothing more fun than an original style.
On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, sIo (898) wrote:

i actually really like this. this is pretty freaking awesome. i can relate.