My Demise - (You've Raped Me)

By Krusifire

You've raped me.
You knew just how to peel off my skin.
Now I sit inside my rage.
With no way to express my sins.
You've raped me.
To the point that I flee from my only solice.
My writings were my souls need.
To confide in itself and save me from this.
I know i've been raped.
I'm afraid to speak again.
But I swear, If I don't release this hate.
There's no telling what will happen.
So here it goes.
I have no choice.
I'm shaking as I stare at this blank page.
Why is it such a conflict when this is all I know.
How dare you steal my voice.
How dare you cage my hate.
You've raped me for the last time.
This layer of rage won't penetrate.
Now my writings are illigitimate.
Because no matter how much I write.
I still hate.
I'll drain this pen of all my blood until nothings left.
I'll never forgive any of you.
For the part of me you almost destroyed.
You almost ruined me, but i'm not through.
Disgust and hate has filled this void.
The end of you will be your fascination.
In my minds twisted ways.
So, I do this to keep us from extinction.
But mostly to kill you slowly with each passing day.

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Copyright 2004 Krusifire
Published on Saturday, December 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Tuesday, August 29, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    so... how do you really feel?...

  • A former member wrote: that was my fav write ive read ever i loved it it describes me so clearly im shocked it was blunt but also complexed it was PERFECT

  • spaniellie On Sunday, December 26, 2004, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    i loved this write. from the moment i started reading it i was locked in."I'm shaking as I stare at this blank page. Why is it such a conflict when this is all I know." i loved that line it shows me your perspective in dealing with such a shitty situation

  • JiNx On Sunday, December 26, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    Wow.. very intense.. Hate radiates from this piece of work it's an awesome write! Very well written -JiNx(ie)

  • AniDayz On Saturday, December 25, 2004, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    very intense...'you almsot ruined me but i'm not through...'--shows strength---the whole piece is flowing with strength. nice write

  • K_Love On Saturday, December 25, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    I can feel the hate bleeding throughout your words, intense write. Well written.

  • ShadowFlight On Saturday, December 25, 2004, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    very well done... (and will make a good lyric)... your voice is still there, nice and clear

  • Dei On Saturday, December 25, 2004, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    extrordinary piece. I can totally relate to it. And It brought me strait into those feelings. Wonderful!

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