Aphrodite's Punishment
By Kali Ma
I never thought I would fall in love,
and I tried my best to fight the feeling.
And when it finally struck me down
like an arrow in the side
stinging and cutting and winning,
It stole away my reason.
For Aphrodite is not to be scorned,
for she will teach humility,
and grudging respect by punishing readily
those who harden their hearts to love.
She will let Cupid's arrows fly
and strike the hearts of those who defy
and they shall fall like all the rest
though they may try and fight the conquest;
a goddess is not one to contend with.
And so I caught the arrow of love,
and fell for a stunning boy
who stole my breath and quickened my heart
and taught me the futility of trying to thwart
what fate and the gods decide upon.
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Copyright 2004 Kali Ma
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On Friday, January 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen
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incredible write!
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A former member wrote:
Yes. I have to agree. This is a wonderful write. Keep it up.
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On Monday, December 27, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
very nice write indeed, beautifully stated, clear and very well expressed. lovely work.
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
This was incredibly written. I feel that pain very much. Very well done.
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
soft and painfull... welcome to love =)
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A former member wrote:
nice write...i enjoyed it
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On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, physicalgraffiti
(56) wrote:
wow...this was so great. the metaphors were wonderful. thank you.
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On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
this is beautiful...i love it**