This LiFe

By Black_Cherry_Doll_

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
Controlled in every way

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
With every freedom taken away

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
But they can't control my thought

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
I try to run but always get caught

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
She keeps a watchful eye on me

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
She always tells me where I can be

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
She likes to remind me she's boss

I hate this life
I'm forced to live
But when I leave it will be her loss.

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Copyright 2004 Black_Cherry_Doll_
Published on Sunday, December 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i deffinitely understand feeling this way about a parent

  • VenomPlease On Sunday, December 12, 2004, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    Yeah I agree, sounds mother-daughterish. But an excellent write. Can't say I've never felt the same.

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Monday, December 13, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    yes, you guys r right. wrote this one back when I thought she was just all out to ruin my life !LOL! Now I know better---steph

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