It's When I Close My Eyes

By Syn

It's when I close my eyes
that you're but a moment away
It's when I close my eyes
Im devoid of guilt and pain
It's when I close my eyes
I feel your breath
brush across my fingertips

If an eternity with you meant sleep
I'd close my eyes to the demons
that plague my mind
I'd close my eyes to hold you...
hold you deep inside.

It's when I close my eyes
I hear you call
It's when I close my eyes
that you break my fall
It's when I close my eyes
I feel you against me
warm, secure, close

If an eternity with you meant sleep
I'd close my eyes to the world
that keeps you from me...
keeps me from having you.

It's when I close my eyes
that we're one...
It's when I close my eyes
we can go on.

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Friday, December 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • I IS ME On Monday, April 2, 2018, I IS ME (380)By person wrote:

    We not only like we recommend

  • Mahakala On Sunday, April 16, 2006, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    I dont have the words to describe how beautiful this one is....wonderful poem...

  • Silent Assassin On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    You have such a wonderful writting style. I enjoyed this one. By the way, I agree with you on Kurt. I also like your lyrics and those bands. Very cool.

  • DarkWolf On Monday, December 13, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    You have such talent.. I love the way you express things.. just beautiful.. -Michael

  • purr_verse On Saturday, December 11, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    gentle and lovely write. soft, warm and heartfelt.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful poem

  • leyos On Saturday, December 11, 2004, leyos (3)By person wrote:

    very nice sounds like me with a departed friend

  • Angst Queen On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    Enchanting Syn. Impressive work

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