Ichor

By NeverMore

You made me bleed,
Slaying my back
With gorgeous talons,
Shining with the glow
Of your sex...

A night of painful
Ecstacy, the ichor
Liberated from my
Veins in a

Beautiful display
Of pain, loathing,
Despair. You bit
Into my neck
And freed

My being,
My soul,
My self...

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Copyright 2004 NeverMore
Published on Thursday, November 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, November 13, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    Amazing, I'm wordless... Scholar

  • blue On Monday, October 17, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Ichor indeed.. your words flow so gracefully.. smoothly. You have a new fan :) ~b

  • Stormcomin On Thursday, November 18, 2004, Stormcomin (32)By person wrote:

    I had to double take on this and "Butterflies". But you did a fine job of taking from one and creating another.

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