Unforgiven

By Stormcomin

Unforgiven is the monster from breath beginning
For the way of angels, fear not the light
Condemned is the beast,
Damned and grinning
Compelled as a slave of the night

He hears the screams,
And they haunt his dreams
They pound with each beat of his heart
He wants only to die
But he only can cry
As his mind slowly tears him apart

Oh forsaken is the being of death created
For the way of demons, seek not for tears
Designed is the fiend,
Formed and hated
Consumed by the lust of his fears

His are the screams,
That haunt his own dreams
And pound with each beat of his heart
His words form the cry
"Oh please let me die"
And the bleeding begins to start...

As his mind slowly tears him apart

His mind slowly tears him apart

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Copyright 2004 Stormcomin
Published on Tuesday, November 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    great write:)

  • island warrior On Tuesday, December 7, 2004, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Way to go.Well written.

  • A former member wrote: *claps* nice job!

  • Storm On Tuesday, November 9, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    Agree with BH: 4th stanza kicked poetry arse! And the rythm of it was just brilliant. Great write. ~S

  • Butterfly On Tuesday, November 9, 2004, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    The 4th stanza holds infinite emotion. Very good write.

  • A former member wrote: This is a great read. Well done...

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