Boom

By rondant

My life is in shreads
But i keep hanging by that thread
If you want to laugh, go ahead
I might as well go back to bed
But i'll stay awake instead
With all these thoughts racing in my head
Then you tell me it's over, it's the moment I dread

BOOM
I'm dead

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Copyright 2004 rondant
Published on Tuesday, November 2, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • darkleprechaun On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, darkleprechaun (56)By person wrote:

    I mean no harm, however, it could have used a little more umph. though i did clearly understand you. It was well put.

  • A former member wrote: I like this.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    "Then you tell me it's over, it's the moment I dread".... nicely done, simple but effective as well..

  • glasshouse On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    Hmmmm..... I think I like this. Not sure why. But I do. I'll come back when I can clear my mind. -Glass

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