In my mind

By Dayer

In my mind
I can do anything
Be anything

In my mind
I am all
I am the one

In my mind
Be it flying
Be it falling

In my mind
I do it all
I feel it all

In my mind
I am loved
I am happy

In my mind
Now give me another pill...

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Copyright 2004 Dayer
Published on Monday, September 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Northstar On Monday, September 6, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    paxil and zoloft and prozac oh my! giggles--nicely done ;)

  • A former member wrote: I think he's talking about a different kind of antidepresant

  • Dayer On Monday, September 6, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    *cough* she LOL & although I was referring to a different kind of pill, readers often take things differently, such is the beauty of poetry :)

  • lordshadow On Monday, September 6, 2004, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    I liked the ending a lot. But you're far too nice to not be loved by someone and to not be happy. Keep writing, because your work makes me happy.

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