don't tell me your shit don't stink!

By mysticventures





Putrid
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Rancid
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Vile
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Odoriferous
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Love you I do
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But don't tell me your shit don't stink
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Shut the goddamn bathroom door!!!


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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Friday, September 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Hahahahaha! I always come back to this one when I need a good laugh.

  • A former member wrote: Haha, this was soo great.

  • A former member wrote: ROFLMAO!!! great writing...i love it!!!*ScandaL*

  • Mr King On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Funny... interesting too... I was wondering if this was simply a literal piece vs. there being a deeper or more universal meaning behind it. :~P

  • A former member wrote: Lol, put a smile on my face. Thanks

  • ONEANDLONELY On Thursday, September 9, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (117)By person wrote:

    Are you moving in a different direction?Humor that is....a.o.k. by me...

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, September 4, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    LOL. A very funny one. I don't wanna know the inspiration for it. Thank you again for causing me to laugh. -Michael

  • A_Puppet_Show On Saturday, September 4, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (166)By person wrote:

    hehe great idea, I dont envy how you got it though *chuckle*

  • Dayer On Friday, September 3, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    LOL I love this, great job, it's perfect :)

  • A former member wrote: caroline, CAROLINE! see caroline all the guys would say she's mighty fine!

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Friday, September 3, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    *laughs* I completely agree. This is awesome. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: Thanks, Mystic! Now if you'll excuse me, I'll go change my underwear! I see this as an antidote to some of the 'shitty' poems some people write, including my own, so thanks. Damn! This made me laugh today! I'm still laughing! ~Shane~

  • K_Love On Friday, September 3, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    hahaha... Wow... this is very... umm... unique. hahah wow, I like it muchos. ~Kirsten~

  • Sleepwalker On Friday, September 3, 2004, Sleepwalker (15)By person wrote:

    I love it....complete masterpiece. I can't stop laughing...great work

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