say it
By Exodus
I took your promise.
And inclosed it in my hands.
I remained positive,
Because I know I ruin everything.
But you are late again
And this cant keep happening
Because I have nothing left in me
To forgive this.
Your words don’t mean shit.
When you constantly rip them away from me.
Replacing them with new, consoling ones.
And again.
I take your promise and hold it close to me.
I closed my eyes and tried to pretend
You were going to save me this time.
("dont say you're sorry"-broken)
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Monday, August 30, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
Very clear. It has a lot of emotion in it. I can feel the pain as I read... powerful...
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A former member wrote:
This is hot stuff! I love the line, "I closed my eyes and tried to pretend"... in some way that just speaks to me. I love it. Can't wait to read more of your work.
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On Monday, August 30, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Oh my god.. I can relate to this more than you could imagine. Aside from that, this is excellent, your wording is always so fluent, your message like a crystal clear punch. Very nice work. I love it.