Fire, Fire

By mysticventures



Fire, fire

My desire

Wanton lust

My emotions mire



Fire, fire

My desire

Fueling rage

That ignites my ire



Fire, fire

My desire

Burns inside

Like a funeral pyre



Fire, fire

My desire

Satiate me

And quell the fire

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Sunday, August 22, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: very nice write...i love it!!!

  • Dayer On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    ooh I loves this :)

  • A former member wrote: Hmmm. Is this a staement on carnal desires or the seracg for greater awareness? Either way very well done.

  • A former member wrote: my element being that of fire, lol. I really likes this write. FIRE FIRE!!!!, lol.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    If we could quench it, would we cease to exist?

  • Munkey On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    I'm kinda a pyro so I like this poem on two levels it's just that one could land me 10 years in jail. Oh well it would be fun anyway ;) -Munkey-

  • elisa On Sunday, August 22, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    Fueling the poetry fires:) Burning Hot! elisa

  • TheReap On Sunday, August 22, 2004, TheReap (38)By person wrote:

    *hands mystic a fire extinguisher* - lol - just kidding - nice!

  • mysticventures On Sunday, August 22, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    thanks Mr Meat - but there's alot more where that came from!

  • A former member wrote: Hey Mystic, this is HOTTER THAN HELL! Ya know this is the very first poem I've read of yours except for the Dr. Seuss poem. Turn up the heat!

  • mysticventures On Sunday, August 22, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    the keyword here is 'quell' - not to be mistaken with 'quench' which is simply not possible!

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