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Subliminal
By Dayer
She lives with no regrets
Kindly offering the pleasures men seek
An affordable panderer of fantasies
Neglecting self-respect for self fulfillment
Kidlike beliefs that sex is the only way
She lives with her legs apart
Self respect removed with her cherry
To gain that needed attention from men
Isn't that what makes girls popular?
Lonely, struggling to gain dignity
Living with her legs wide open
Looking for comfort in sex warmed sheets
Undressing men with her seductive eyes
Reassuring herself, "He really loves me"
Knowing she has never had a real love
He'll keep coming back to me, she thinks
Even as she hears whispers of
Reputations, convincing herself what they say is a lie
Every self replicating logic is based on self deception...
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Note: There is a subliminal message hidden in this poem, can you find it?
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Copyright 2004 Dayer
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Subliminal"
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, girlafraid
(480)
wrote:
hmmm i think i know this girl...i like the subliminal, it doesn't seem forced like others with this form...nice work
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
probably because this was the 1st one of the subliminals that I wrote, I guess it came more naturally, thanks ;)
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A former member wrote:
Skanks still lurk here hehehehe
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On Tuesday, September 7, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
hehe yup LOL ;)
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
So you've met my ex?
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
great closing line particularly; and subliminals lie in the beginning of every line... :)
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
yes purr_verse you got it :)
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
nope, cant find it but this was still a great peom to read.~~~Grave
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