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One wish a Thousand words
By thinevoicetragic
If i had one wish. It would be, that we were ment to be together
for all eternity. If I had one wish, it would be, that we were something
so pure and so true.
Yet, my wish is just a whisper, a prayer that will never be
answered. Lost in the dark.If you hold me close you'll catch the spark.
I'm stuck in a neverending dream and cought in a worlwind of lies.
You and I Are.
So entwined.
So alligned.
I wish that you were here, my love, my dear,
Feelings so compatable. Our love for eachother, untoutchable.
Our passions so desireable,
yet these feelings make me so uncomfortable.
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Copyright 2004 thinevoicetragic
Published on Saturday, August 14, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "One wish a Thousand words"
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A former member wrote:
beautiful beautiful beautiful
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A former member wrote:
This flows beautifuly you prolly dont remember me given teh new account, but this is Immortality Ends, or Mike just sayin hello and commenting on your beautiful works.
~Heretic
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On Friday, August 27, 2004, DarkWolf
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wrote:
I love this one.. I would quote lines but there are too many.. excellent write. -Michael
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On Thursday, August 26, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
Well thought out and written. So full of flowing emotion with an eye opening end. Nicely done
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
Well written the feeling is conveyed so well
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, elisa
(1595) wrote:
i'm living this poem....well said. elisa
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A former member wrote:
this is beautiful
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