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One Nights Dream
By Metal Lullaby
Fresh breath of thy heart dip into my soul
Fresh moment of bliss never be gone
Thy bosom blossomed and whole
Thine silver cape embossed with the dawn
Warming all it touches upon
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Laying high on open hill
Falling beneath the dawning sky
Waking in utter deep fill
Forever to thee I shall comply
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Those were the days that I miss
Heart high and soul at rest
Ending the night with a lingering kiss…
Those are the days that are gone
In peace, in emptiness…
…My heart never was won…
Those are the days of imagination…
Never did they occur
They flowed from speculation
And now, and now, all I know is laughter
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Copyright 2005 Metal_Lullaby
Comments on "One Nights Dream"
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A former member wrote:
naww!
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A former member wrote:
I personally enjoyed this more than your two nights dream, none the less, it is astounding. Especially the first two stanzas, you painted a beautiful picture for me.
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On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
what a lovely form you have, and i must admit there is a nice quantity of quality words found within this piece, welcome to DP ~kristy
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On Monday, February 21, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
great write...love it! a unique style in its own, welcome to dp! -Kel
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On Monday, February 14, 2005, Metal Lullaby
(47) wrote:
that was for sticky kitty.
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On Monday, February 14, 2005, Metal Lullaby
(47) wrote:
it is neither. and i dont understand how u came to either deduction. thx for the good comments!
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
very nicely done...loved everything about it! welcome to DP
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, thinevoicetragic
(52) wrote:
very nice. very shakespear like. love. it. old egnlish is the greatest. \m/
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
This is really good, the rhymnming flowed so well and the message was portrayed with beauty
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
my previous comment was for when this piece said no words and had no title it's a work of brillance now lovely -kitty
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
is this a cry for attention or you want to be heard but have nothing to say? like the intrigue I'd hug you -kitty
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