Renewing

By Ulfric

There is this honey ember look within
her eyes that tells me when the time has come
to put away the clever arguments
and trick devices of my intellect.

A minute later then, when she first slips
inside the covers pulling close and warm,
we resonate inside an endless string
of pure and perfect little moments where

She purrs and murmurs quietly her locks
of jasmine splayed across my rising chest,
the rhythm of my heart and hers in soft
and quiet congregation lulling both

of us to deep forgetful sleep.

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Copyright 2004 Ulfric
Published on Thursday, November 6, 2014.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Loneal On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    The mood you create here is very warm, comfortable, and peaceful. Well done. :) ~L/S.D.

  • stormtalk On Thursday, August 19, 2004, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    Most beautiful. I will read the rest of your work. I see you haven't posted in a while... I can already tell I will soon think to ask you for more.

  • purr_verse On Monday, August 2, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    this is absolutely gorgeous, in format, phrase and intent. ...come with me, little beautypoem... *faveclicks*

  • Anth On Friday, July 30, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    this is really something else, i got lost in it,mezmorizingly expressed.i love the thought behind this,and the presentation thereof,truly brilliant

  • Northstar On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful--what you have expressed here defies all shackles--you give and receive boundless love

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, July 29, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    beautiful, intelligent, well spoken.........urban

  • Soulseeker On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    Very vivid descriptions! *and trick devices of my intellect*.... Great line! Good play of words. Bethany

  • NikesRain On Thursday, July 29, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    .. lovely descriptions used, beautiful sentiments, exquisite imagery and feelings eminate from this. So lovely.

  • girlafraid On Thursday, July 29, 2004, girlafraid (480)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful...i love the delicate details...very nice

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