Renewing
By Ulfric
There is this honey ember look within
her eyes that tells me when the time has come
to put away the clever arguments
and trick devices of my intellect.
A minute later then, when she first slips
inside the covers pulling close and warm,
we resonate inside an endless string
of pure and perfect little moments where
She purrs and murmurs quietly her locks
of jasmine splayed across my rising chest,
the rhythm of my heart and hers in soft
and quiet congregation lulling both
of us to deep forgetful sleep.
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Copyright 2004 Ulfric
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Loneal
(86) wrote:
The mood you create here is very warm, comfortable, and peaceful. Well done. :) ~L/S.D.
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On Thursday, August 19, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Most beautiful. I will read the rest of your work. I see you haven't posted in a while... I can already tell I will soon think to ask you for more.
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On Monday, August 2, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
this is absolutely gorgeous, in format, phrase and intent. ...come with me, little beautypoem... *faveclicks*
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On Friday, July 30, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
this is really something else, i got lost in it,mezmorizingly expressed.i love the thought behind this,and the presentation thereof,truly brilliant
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
this is beautiful--what you have expressed here defies all shackles--you give and receive boundless love
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
beautiful, intelligent, well spoken.........urban
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
Very vivid descriptions! *and trick devices of my intellect*.... Great line! Good play of words. Bethany
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
.. lovely descriptions used, beautiful sentiments, exquisite imagery and feelings eminate from this. So lovely.
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
this is beautiful...i love the delicate details...very nice