Siren Song
By Ulfric
I see the bruises from our play
have faded from your body yet
I wonder often how your soul
endures, no thrives, the torment of
your smooth delicious skin.
Oh succubus of sinful sweet
surrender gazing up with eyes
of cobalt catastrophically
inclined to pull from me the heat
of yet another stroke.
There is some power kindled here
that speaks of love or maybe life
primeval bound together hand
in golden hair with teeth and tongue
embracing shivered flesh.
Then coming home with sick delight
in writhing chambers rocked with blasts
of scarlet red explosions marked
by silent screaming echoes of
delight and terror mixed.
Within the quiet space between
I feel your wicked spirit's touch
forgiving battered tresspassed flesh
while quietly my eyes find yours
and in them read my doom.
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Comments on "Siren Song"
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On Wednesday, August 25, 2010, Kittykat
(35) wrote:
Like candy for my senses, Ohhh so sweet, I'll read this one often. Thanks.
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On Tuesday, November 20, 2007, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
" delight and terror mixed." - I love the dichonomy presented in the Siren's song. You weave words beautifully. I am also one who loves utilizing sirens and succubi in poetry, so reading this was a pleasure. " forgiving battered tresspassed flesh" - stunning language.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was hot indeed "primeval bound together hand in golden hair with teeth and tongue embracing shivered flesh" *shudders*...
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Loneal
(86) wrote:
*grin* Intersting take on this very basic instinct. ;) Once again, well written! ~L/S.D.
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On Thursday, August 17, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
*grins* You read me right here, I loved it delicious and devious the way it should be ~Gothic
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On Sunday, August 15, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
This made me shiver, with delight or by doomshakes I'm not sure If I wish to investigate further.. Very sexy and twisted.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
The Siren and the succuba ... I would be a hypocrite not to leave a mark in your totem for your use. After all I have used the two more then any psychologist would deem healthy. Allthough most often in an indirect way.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
I have seen here a use that is more direct, and it was interesting. Tiger
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
very impressive; rich and beautiful evocation. lovely write.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
really nice piece * i enjoyed this deeply * reminds me of shrooms & love mixed* or x 'cid candy flip'n .. *669*
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
Wow. Spicy. I echo our friend, Nike. It was very captivating. I'm impressed and look forward to hearing more from you. *hug* -Glass
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
..this was extemely intense to read. I couldn't look away, it held my mind. Nicely done indeed.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
*smiles* you never cease to amaze me