Where?

By mysticventures

Where does my soul thus wonder

While my head lay rested on your shoulder?


Does it gain a sense of freedom

From the wholeness of my heart?


Or does it flee with the sigh of my comfort

And abandon me to the security of my blss?


Or perhaps, it is in my peace that it revels

And, in the longing once lost, now stirred?

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, July 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This really makes me think and wonder. Very intruiging.

  • A former member wrote: elegant, eloquent, elucid, excellent, exhuberant, how many more adjectives can I apply

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    an internal and introverted question.......so well spoken.......urban

  • A former member wrote: This is lovely and thought provoking, as I find with many of your writes...it's always a pleasure to read, Mr. Mystic.

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